Tuesday 3 January 2012

Tirl C3


chapter 3-The tribe
Are they going to test on us?

At the african's camp
Abbey and Jake are being forced to go with the guards, they drag them into one of big tents
As that happens the natives chanted the leaders name "zuki" until he finally steps into the tent.


Zuki: do you know why you're here?
Abbey: umm... no
Zuki: because you refuse to hand over the stone!
Abbey: i don't have the stone !!
Jake: she's probably lying ...
Abbey: (to zuki) can you shut him up?

zuki flicks his hand towards Jake in mid-air

Jake: hmmm... hmm!!
Abbey: thanks... you have got to teach me that!
Zuki: you can probably do it because you are in possession of the stone
Abbey: i haven't even seen this stone before, except when it's glowing!... but after that it just disappears!
Zuki: LIES!
Abbey: oh please stop going on about me lying about this stupid stone!

A little flicker of something sparkly flashes in mid-air for a split second and Zuki forgets all about the stone, he then walks away mumbling about some work that had to be done... he ordered his soldiers to follow his lead, they did with confusion on their faces and slowly walked with him after giving Abbey a weird stare. 

Abbey: okay... what just happened?
Jake: hmmm!.... hm.. hmmm...
Abbey: okay i can't hear you !
Jake: yeah because you told him to ... i can speak again... his right ... maybe you really have got some powers...
Abbey: well he has kind of stop going on about the stupid stone so maybe i have ... okay this is weird
Jake: just don't freak out... who know what will happen?!

She Nods in agreement, what if she made everything worse than it already is, talking about something could make it happen, and right now she just wanted to find out why they are here, and what's this stone... but she'd rather keep her mouth shut and just find a way out of here...  
But she didn't want to go home, anywhere but there, if she went back home, it would mean she might be in big trouble for disappearing...  



Jake looked round the tent for the opening in it, but he couldn't seem to find it, like it was just a never ending circled tent with no opening.

there must be a way out!

The African people gathered and the troops discussed what had just happened to their leader... one of them went over to tell him but got sent to deal with some other matter. As much as they tried, they were rejected and he had no re-collection of what happened at all. 
Zuki looked at his reflection in the mirror and suddenly started to realise what had just happened and got everyone gathered to hunt for Jake and Abbey again. 
After hours of searching high and low for them... all they found were pieces of their clothing which were ripped off while carrying them to prominent ground of their camp to the leader Zuki. 
Zuki looked at these pieces of clothing, both cloth off top sleeves he conjured up. 
"we shall use these to track them down once our potions master has made what we need to find them... then once we do... they will soon know what hit them and will be sorry for escaping. 
shall have my jewels back... our ancestors depend on us to bring them back!"

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