Tuesday 3 January 2012

Tirl C2


chapter 2

Abbey starts running for her life as she tries to get away from the people after her, she screams and falls to the ground, she tries grabbing onto something but she can't they start getting closer; she can feel their heavy breathing all over her, the one grabs her and ...

Abbey: ahhhh!
Lisa: you alright Abbey...?! 
Sam: its us your parents... don't worry your gonna be okay...you just had a bad dream, the doctor said you can go home when your ready
Abbey:huh?
Lisa: you're in hospital sweetie
Sam: you must of hit your head quite hard sweetie
Abbey: i did?... did you guys feel the earthquake?
Sam: earthquake... what earthquake?
-Sam and Lisa both looked at each other concerned-
Lisa: I'll go and get you something to drink, come on Sam

They walk out
Abbey looks round the room, in the corner of her eye she spots something shining in her pocket
she reaches for it, and she feels a tingle on her hand, like pins and needles
she takes it out and looks at it in her hand, there it sat; a green emerald 
It stops glowing, the pins and needles feeling goes away. She looks up to find herself lying in the desert on the sand

Abbey: huh... hello?... how did i get here...

She says to herself really quietly, hoping some miracle would happen.
The emerald slips out of hand, she looks back up to find herself at the hospital with emerald back in her pocket
Lisa and Sam walk back in.

Sam: so how you feeling?
Abbey: a little strange
Lisa: huh... doctor said you was fine... 

Jake walks in... 
mom and dad walk back out calling for the Doctor, 'our daughter isn't...'

Jake: what was that all about
Abbey: what you doing here?
Jake: sorry to intrude but i was forced to come here, not like i wanted to come or anything...
Abbey: well it don't matter anyway.
-to her self-
i can't get rid of this stupid stone
Jake: what stupid stone...?

She shows him, he looks at it glowing, he seemed to be getting entranced by the shining colours, then when he looks around him, he finds himself and Abbey in a rainforest, water dripping from the rocks and the distant sound of a waterfall.
They hear parrots, frogs and monkeys all calling out their wierd noises. The sky was filled with purple instead of blue. 
This was deffinately no real rainforest.
Jake: great look where are now!
Abbey: stop yelling, this wasn't my fault
Jake: then whose fault is it ?!
Abbey: the stone's!!
Jake: and who picked up the stone ?!
Abbey: i didn't, i was just in my pocket!
Jake: like im going to believe that...
Abbey: i don't know... i don't believe it myself to be honest!!
Jake: ha!
Abbey: Jake this isn't a laughing matter were stuck in the middle of a rainforest 
Jake: I'm not laughing about that, im actually quite worried about that but yeah, you're trying to say that stone just... appeared in your pocket!
Abbey: well... yes!... if i woke up with it in my pocket and i haven't seen it in my life!
Jake: uh... well okay then ... whatever you say!
Abbey: you don't believe me do you ?
Jake: nope
Abbey: fine then don't what do you think happened?
Jake: well... you... must of done something!
Abbey: like what! knock you out, get on a plane and fly us all the way over here?
Jake: i didn't say that ...
Abbey: no... i know but its what you was getting at...

The leafs start to rustle

Jake: who's there?!
Abbey: yeah i don't like the sound of this...
Jake: me neither now shush!
Abbey: you shush!

The leafs rustle a bit more, a voice whispers this is no time to bicker then a foot steps out of the bushed and onto the ground, an african tribe man steps out with a spear pointing towards the sky. Abbey and Jake both look up in response, the look on their faces had just pure fear on them.

???: hello young ones, welcome to liz-sar-rith
Jake :ha... hi 
Abbey: yeah... hi
???: im zuki and you must have the stone?
Abbey: yeah we do and we'll be glad to hand it over...

she reaches into he pocket to find it not there 

Jake: well abbey, give the nice man the stone!
Abbey: ha... funny story, it was in my pocket... and now it isn't ...
zuki: liar!
Abbey: no im not !
zuki: you have stone i can tell !
Jake: Abbey you had the stone !
Abbey: not helping !
zuki: so the stone has just dissapeared has it ? very well... 
-he took a step towards her, then began to point the spear at her-Abbey: yes ... im not lying!
Jake: unlikely story, she always lies
Abbey: to you !
Jake: yeah which makes me not believe you !
Abbey: oh would you shut up!
Zuki: DIAM!!
Jake: huh?
Abbey: i'm taking that shout as a shut up...
Jake: oh...

Two other african men step out of the bushes
they grab Jake and Abbey before they had a chance to say anything
putting a full apple in their mouth, they then began to drag them
they dissapear into the bushes

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