Tuesday 3 January 2012

Tirl C1


This story is a bit different from life, in a way... this story includes a normal family of 4
a Mom named Lisa who obsesses life should "normal"
a Dad named Sam who wants the best for his family
a Girl named Abbey who just wants to live her own life and doesn't care about what the family does
and a Brother named Jake who's the perfect one in the family, straight A student at school and everyone in the family adores him, except Abbey of course
The girl and the boy fight alot because their well first of all brother and sister but their like opposites but sometimes opposites attract, not in this case though
oh and there's a dog called George, so in thats case its a family of 5


Chapter 1- just a "normal" life...
monday morning, Abbey and Jake, walking down the stairs; on their way to school.

Abbey: urg why do you always have to be right!
Jake:because its my natural gift...
Abbey:yeah right...
Jake:your just jealous thats all
Abbey:ew no, why would i be jealous of you... loser
Jake:i am not a loser!
Abbey:only a loser would say that...

-Lisa appears at the bottom of the stairs-

Lisa: ok kids...
Abbey :mom im not a kid anymore
Lisa: your right im sorry, of course its your first day of high school
Jake: yeah and its my second year woo!
abbey: yeah and im a teenager now
Lacy: i know honey, well you better be going right?
Jake: yeah mom bye 
Lisa: love you Jake
Abbey: ew family talk I'm going...

Sam walks down stairs after just waking up

Sam :what did i miss?
Lisa: just our daughter leaving for her first day of high school
Sam:they grow up so fast...
-They both wave at them through the window, Abbey smiles without meaning it, while Jake waves and smiles; then they both step on the bus.-
Outside the school, the bus pulls up, and out run loads of screaming and giggling teenagers, then off comes Abbey at the end who is totally freaked out by it all, Jake is already standing by the front door ready to go in, chatting with his friends
Abbey, speaking to sally, her friend; who she has known since kindergarten was just having the usual chat about the weekend and how lame Abbey's brother is, sally trying to convince her to think "his family."

Abbey:ew look at him, standing right outside the doors waiting to go in, such a loser
Sally:Abbey... just because you don't like school, dont mean to say he can't 
Abbey:yeah whatever...
Sally:so what we got first lesson
Abbey:oh... you think im actually going to lessons... ew no... ha
Sally:you can't be serious what are you going to do all day?
Abbey:well i was hoping to pop in and out of different lessons... ooo i'll go to art lesson !
Sally:that's the only lesson you'll go to?
Abbey:yepp!

Sally shakes her head 

Sally:well see you in art, second lesson!
Abbey:and between lesson!
Sally:oh yeah ... duh!

It comes to the end of school, Sally and Abbey are walking to the bus, Jake is walking behind them.

Jake:apperently you skipped every lesson but art...
Abbey:so...
Jake:so im telling mom
Abbey:fine, i'll tell her about the incident the other day
-his eyes circle the room in thought-
Jake:fine ... you win, i won't tell

He walks away,  disappointed she won this time; while Sally and Abbey get on the bus

Sally: do you always have something against him?
Abbey: umm... pretty much!
Sally: haha, so what you doing when you get back home?
Abbey: oh i don't know... probs just blast my music in my room
Sally: oh... ha... i'm going to my mom's club if you wanna come?
Abbey: what is it?
Sally: knitting
Abbey: umm... no thanks
-she pats her on the shoulder-Sally: okay see ya

she gets off the bus, back at home, Abbey is blasting her music in her room like she said she would, Jake is in his room on his computer, everyone else is in the living room.

Jake:TURN IT DOWN! I CAN'T HEAR MY SELF THINK IN HERE...!

no one answers...
Jake knocks on her door serveral times with detirmination to get her attention.
she opens the door with an almighty pull, the door swings open with wind blowing in her face. The face on Abbey seems like she 
has just been woken up in the middle of the night.


-dad downstairs-

Sam:your brother is right Abb' i can't hear the TV down here
Abbey:urg fine!

she turns it off and storms past him, brushing him by the shoulder, Jake rubs his shoulder a little

Jake:you didn't have to turn it off !
Abbey:yeah but what's the point of listening to it quietly?
Jake:what?!

She drags her feet down the stairs, and goes in the backgarden, the dog follows her

Abbey:see george im forced to come outside, well at least i'll have company
Sam:george your food is here!
Abbey:thanks dad! urg!

Everything goes quiet outside, as Abbey sits by the tree she looks up at the leafs rustling in the wind a slow breeze in the air.
She notices a sparkle in one of the leafs at the top of the tree, she thinks; curiously she tilts her head.
A big gust of wind blows the tree to one side, the thing that was sparkling fell out of the tree and landed on the floor.
She looks at it as it shines in the sun, it begins to blind her so she sheilds her eyes.
She looks again and it wasn't there anymore, vanished, she thought she was seeing things through her angry thoughts.
"Huh" she thinks, she starts looking round to see if the wind had blew it around the garden, but no sign of it.
A screeching noise was heard, getting louder with every second, deafing her; she covers her ears, at that moment  ground starts to rumble as if it was a earthquake. 
The force of it gets that strong it knocks her flying into the tree, she whacks her head, knocking herself into a deep sleep.
 
The object stopped shining and disappeared with the wind.


Sam hears a thud, he immediatly rushes outside; he runs to Abbey and grabs her shoulder, as if trying to wake her up but no response.

Jake, followed by Lisa run outside to see what all the commotion is. Jake spots Abbey on the floor, eyes closed and not looking very peachy. He kneels on the floor and begins to speak to her, trying to reassure that everything is going to be okay. 
Sam:Abbey?... wake up honey... Abbey!
Lisa:Abbey... whats happened?
Sam: I don't know all i heard was a bang outside and here she is... 
Lisa:we'll have to call an abulance!
Sam:Jake!!!
Jake:yeah?
Sam:phone an abulance, your sister, must have whacked her head on something.

Jake rushes to the phone,and quickly dials 911

Jake:hello, can i have an abulance please?!

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